OhMyCaptain's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Elysium Spoiler in 90 Sec]

"So this time I tried to focus on backgrounds, fluidity in camera movement and more care with drawing stuff." I believe you met your goals and did a spot-on job at that! Your animation/drawing still needs a bit of work, but if you cleaned it up a little you might just come up with your own stylized drawing method! (NIFTY!) Overall, I think you summed up the entirety of the movie pretty well. Matt Damon is pretty cool though... Anyways, 3.5 stars for outstanding effort and a willingness to take constructive criticism, you have my respect. Now that you've gotten a hand at both animation and background transitions, try to incorporate the two of them together. All with the ultimate goal of telling a heartwarming, meaningful story. I really enjoy critiquing your work and seeing you expand on new ideas and concepts. Brings joy to my little heart! <3 That and your rapid improvement. Much support! Keep at it!

[Nolwandle's Story]

This is beautiful. There is nothing that could possibly be said other than praise for this woman, and those like her. Cheers, mate! Glad to see you back around!

[Zainab Story]

Newgrounds is for flash animations. The user community would appreciate if you would please refrain from submitting in-game footage of any kind... It takes away from the entertainment value of the site. Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying your game enough, nonetheless to share it with others.

[The sink]

I really hope, you're trying to take animation seriously. I regrettably watched this with high-hopes. There are a lot of things you ought to work on. Animation is an art, and although my personal opinions rarely count towards anything, I must say that what really broke this animation was the obvious lack of effort put into this piece. If you would only take the time to draw and coordinate a legitimate flash I think you'd do rather well. I find this lack of effort and blatant misuse of your skills disappointing.

flashmakeit responds:

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[Ferrari]

It's an amazing start, and the song itself is what really makes this animation. Now, I'm going to be critical, but only so that you can improve on your efforts. :D So, to start off, the choppy transitions really take a way from the flow of the animation, and I won't hate too much on your drawing style, but your Ferrari looks more like a Scion Tc lunchbox with it's top-half cut off. (LOL) The lack of backgrounds and scenery makes it a little difficult to distinguish the movement and direction of your animation as well. Overall, fluidity and detail are something that this flash lacks considerably, but as a first-time animation, I will still show my support with a 3.5 star rating. I wish you the best, and I hope to see more animated music videos/shorts from you :D

[The Weight]

You beat yourself up way too much, man. There is nothing wrong with being critical of your own work, and I completely understand where you're coming from. But you've got an awesome piece of art here, man! You should be proud of that! Sure, the characters might not necessarily have a set backstory, but that just makes them all the more relatable! This is a really moving piece, and it reminds me of a lot of fond memories. We've all had a moment some time in our life where we wish more than anything that we could just go back and change what we did or how we acted. This animation captures that mentality so well, and wraps it up with a meaningful, unspoken message that even though we might feel insignificant and worthless at times. There are still those who rely on us, and there are those whom we rely on too. Even though the world is a cruel place, it can also be really beautiful. Keep it up, man! Your work is really something else.

[2 Animay shorts]

Great stuff! Keep up the amazing work! I'm not a huge fan of the potty humor anymore, but I guess it has it's value. Nonetheless, quite fluid, went together well, and all in all a totally solid piece.

[The Undeadfeated]

Absolutely fantastic, I loved it. Really cheered me up :)

[Game Grumps: Arin's PMS]

Well, that escalated quickly...

[Air Break]

I can relate, because I smoke, and one of my coworkers doesn't and when she asked for a 10min, my manager said the same thing. Thanks for making me laugh, made my day!