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You've got a good start, but in Author comments remember to reference not only the show but it's network and creator. Don't want you getting sued.

Dragoncone responds:

thank you for the tip and thank you also for wathcing my video

Audio just ruined it all, Animation needs some serious work, sound effects were okay, but voice audio files must have been recorded incorrectly, they sound like you recorded them standing 4ft away from your mic with a metronome going to help you keep time, but really all it does is make your audience's ear drums bleed. Please fix.

Dragoncone responds:

this was for a school project so I really did not try to put my best effort into it agian thanks for the tip

Audio is a little bit off towards the end, and it doesn't really need to be a loop, but altogether I'm not going to even go into originality. For the time being, sleep soundly knowing that for a first attempt at flash animation you did quite well for yourself. Not a perfect score, you still have a ways to go, but at the end of the day you can sleep soundly knowing you're not getting blammed.

FelLionheart responds:

Thanks man.

Choppy. Shotty. You need a lot of practice, copying and pasting pictures to create context or dialogue is a good idea, but try drawing the pictures in order to create the illusion of the prior mentioned pictures' movement. In other words try actually animating the dialogue and not just the fight scene. Ontop of that, either use pre-recorded dialogue, or record your own. You're posting things on the internet. People really do not like reading.

Andyrocks responds:

Thanks for the advice I'll really take that in account.

I liked just about everything about this, especially the message. Thank you for being yourself and honest.

Blordow responds:

Thanks, I am proud of how it turned out!

Come on man, seriously? I know it's just for the lolz, but I didn't find any lolz in this... nor any kind of effort.

DaddiBreeze responds:

only had 2 hours to animate . This is what happens

I liked it, I really did. Good voice acting and solid animation.

davohsaurus responds:

:D !!!!

Nice job, smooth animation, I'm especially impressed by the elaborate detail on weapons, powers, and hairstyles/costumes. Overall, you did a solid job, keep up the good work.

Nova1Duke responds:

Thank you very much, more quality more yet to come. :)

It seems rather that no effort was put into this flash at all. Whoever demanded such a video is sure to get an eyesore. I find this completely unworthy of a site like Newgrounds. This isn't a dumping ground for random junk you made because you were bored.

ZebraHumor responds:

It is not random. Zebra Humor animates all zebra jokes.

I write stuff. I like music. I like games. I like the laaaaaaaaaadddddiiii ieeees. And I'm single. Oh wait... this isn't a dating site... my bad, erm... Hi. I don't even... I'm just going to turn this off nao... I LIKE VOICE ACTING!!! AND DRAWING!!!

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