OhMyCaptain's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[WOEdemo]

It's a really good start, it didn't really need to be a loop though. You have some serious potential and I really enjoyed the animation effects. (Almost more so than the actual animation.) Keep in mind that not all of us are speed readers, so some dialogue scenes need to be slowed down. Speech bubbles would also be appreciated. As well as some actual context to the entire flash. But amazing work overall, but 1.5 stars for an unfinished piece and only a demo.

metallicadudify responds:

Yea I'll work on making things more readable. And I don't really know how to make a menu thingy so I can get rid of the loop thingy. I'm new to this stuff. Thanks!

[A Creeper's Life]

This is fantastic, the only problem I had with it were the scene transitions, but if that was intentional then completely ignore this comment. Thanks for the awesome flash though! And the great music too!

[Own the Night advert]

Nice job kid, I'm not going to go into spelling mistakes. You did a nice job, keep animating! You've got some serious potential!

saltfisher responds:

Thanks for your Praise! It's just to bad there isn't a spell check option in flash.

[Johnstuck]

I think this is the first half-decent animation I've seen all day. Thank you, I was about to lose my mind. I commend you for actually making a legitimate flash out of your trials with a certain program or style. I really appreciate the fact that you took the time to actually finish your flash rather than posting a half-assed part 3/34 tester flash that's like 3secs long! Okay, sorry. Done ranting. You did a great job, I hope to see more from you in the future!

UberCream responds:

I really like this review.

[Madness Hank]

If you take this down and continue to animate it into a fully finished Animation, I won't blam this. Keep in mind that writing reviews is hard stuff when you actually try to be helpful. So, there you go. You have my vote.

[Meat Testing]

You've got a good start, but in Author comments remember to reference not only the show but it's network and creator. Don't want you getting sued.

Dragoncone responds:

thank you for the tip and thank you also for wathcing my video

[Kite Runner Parody]

Audio just ruined it all, Animation needs some serious work, sound effects were okay, but voice audio files must have been recorded incorrectly, they sound like you recorded them standing 4ft away from your mic with a metronome going to help you keep time, but really all it does is make your audience's ear drums bleed. Please fix.

Dragoncone responds:

this was for a school project so I really did not try to put my best effort into it agian thanks for the tip

[Pokemon in My Eyes]

Audio is a little bit off towards the end, and it doesn't really need to be a loop, but altogether I'm not going to even go into originality. For the time being, sleep soundly knowing that for a first attempt at flash animation you did quite well for yourself. Not a perfect score, you still have a ways to go, but at the end of the day you can sleep soundly knowing you're not getting blammed.

FelLionheart responds:

Thanks man.