OhMyCaptain's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bottle Adventure]

lolwut? I appreciate really anything Zelda... but despite everything this animation has going for it, it still managed to somehow turn out rather shoddy. Now, I mean no offense. Your author comments truthfully stated that there was a severe lack of 'jokes' which I understood going into watching this. My only concern is the fact that, even though there were no jokes as truthfully stated, what was the overall reason for this animation being made at all? I would hope that it was made for the sole reason of entertainment, but given the literal contents of this animation I found neither entertainment nor any sense as to why anyone would take the time to post something so fundamentally broken as this. Now, animation fluidity and overall art style, I have no complaints about. Just... Where's the story!? And if there is one, WHERE IS THE CONTEXT SO I CAN UNDERSTAND THE STORY!? Please... Consider the fact that even though the Zelda games have an overall religious following, unless there is some given context as to what you are referencing, whether personal or cliche, your audience is going to be completely lost, as I am now.

WeAnimateNow responds:

Thank you! The main point of creating this was... practice. I'm trying to improve my animations; and this is one of my earlier works. I wanted to submit as a part of my portfolio. I understand your complaints- maybe this isn't Newgrounds worthy yet.

[Pounce!]

And made for the lulz! I SURELY LULLED! Thank you for making this. I'm in Cali, a little far south of my home and this made me and my girlfriend laugh quite a bit. Thanks for that, and greetings from CALIFORNIA AND DISNEYLAND. Hhahaha

Eekium responds:

Thanks for the kind review!

[Happy Birthday Dawnie <3]

I'll give you enough to get past judgement because it's for your girlfriend and it's sweet of you, but other than that you're left on your own. Animation is kinda lame and the music choice is a little tasteless, but nonetheless props unto you for making this for your girlfriend!

Tw1l1ghtguy responds:

Thanks :) It made her smile when I showed her it :D
It was only a quick thing. But thanks anyway :)

[WOEdemo]

It's a really good start, it didn't really need to be a loop though. You have some serious potential and I really enjoyed the animation effects. (Almost more so than the actual animation.) Keep in mind that not all of us are speed readers, so some dialogue scenes need to be slowed down. Speech bubbles would also be appreciated. As well as some actual context to the entire flash. But amazing work overall, but 1.5 stars for an unfinished piece and only a demo.

metallicadudify responds:

Yea I'll work on making things more readable. And I don't really know how to make a menu thingy so I can get rid of the loop thingy. I'm new to this stuff. Thanks!

[Own the Night advert]

Nice job kid, I'm not going to go into spelling mistakes. You did a nice job, keep animating! You've got some serious potential!

saltfisher responds:

Thanks for your Praise! It's just to bad there isn't a spell check option in flash.

[Johnstuck]

I think this is the first half-decent animation I've seen all day. Thank you, I was about to lose my mind. I commend you for actually making a legitimate flash out of your trials with a certain program or style. I really appreciate the fact that you took the time to actually finish your flash rather than posting a half-assed part 3/34 tester flash that's like 3secs long! Okay, sorry. Done ranting. You did a great job, I hope to see more from you in the future!

UberCream responds:

I really like this review.